in the work; the opinions 
of his different friends being anything but encouraging. One would
declare that the sea could not be made interesting; that it was tame, 
monotonous, and without any other movement than unpleasant storms, 
and that, for his part, the less he got of it the better. The women very 
generally protested that such a book would have the odor of bilge water, 
and that it would give them the maladie de mer. Not a single individual 
among all those who discussed the merits of the project, within the 
range of the author's knowledge, either spoke, or looked, encouragingly. 
It is probable that all these persons anticipated a signal failure. 
So very discouraging did these ominous opinions get to be that the 
writer was, once or twice, tempted to throw his manuscript aside, and 
turn to something new. A favorable opinion, however, coming from a 
very unexpected quarter, put a new face on the matter, and raised new 
hopes. Among the intimate friends of the writer was an Englishman, 
who possessed most of the peculiar qualities of the educated of his 
country. He was learned even, had a taste that was so just as always to 
command respect, but was prejudiced, and particularly so in all that 
related to this country and its literature. He could never be persuaded to 
admire Bryant's Water-Fowl, and this mainly because if it were 
accepted as good poetry, it must be placed at once amongst the finest 
fugitive pieces of the language. Of the Thanatopsis he thought better, 
though inclined to suspect it of being a plagiarism. To the tender 
mercies of this one- sided critic, who had never affected to compliment 
the previous works of the author, the sheets of a volume of the Pilot 
were committed, with scarce an expectation of his liking them. The 
reverse proved to be the case;--he expressed himself highly gratified, 
and predicted a success for the book which it probably never attained. 
Thus encouraged, one more experiment was made, a seaman being 
selected for the critic. A kinsman, a namesake, and an old messmate of 
the author, one now in command on a foreign station, was chosen, and 
a considerable portion of the first volume was read to him. There is no 
wish to conceal the satisfaction with which the effect on this listener 
was observed. He treated the whole matter as fact, and his criticisms 
were strictly professional, and perfectly just. But the interest he 
betrayed could not be mistaken. It gave a perfect and most gratifying 
assurance that the work would be more likely to find favor with 
nautical men than with any other class of readers. 
The Pilot could scarcely be a favorite with females. The story has little
interest for them, nor was it much heeded by the author of the book, in 
the progress of his labors. His aim was to illustrate vessels and the 
ocean, rather than to draw any pictures of sentiment and love. In this 
last respect, the book has small claims on the reader's attention, though 
it is hoped that the story has sufficient interest to relieve the more 
strictly nautical features of the work. 
It would be affectation to deny that the Pilot met with a most unlooked- 
for success. The novelty of the design probably contributed a large 
share of this result. Sea-tales came into vogue, as a consequence; and, 
as every practical part of knowledge has its uses, something has been 
gained by letting the landsman into the secrets of the seaman's manner 
of life. Perhaps, in some small degree, an interest has been awakened in 
behalf of a very numerous, and what has hitherto been a sort of 
proscribed class of men, that may directly tend to a melioration of their 
condition. 
It is not easy to make the public comprehend all the necessities of a 
service afloat. With several hundred rude beings confined within the 
narrow limits of a vessel, men of all nations and of the lowest habits, it 
would be to the last degree indiscreet to commence their reformation by 
relaxing the bonds of discipline, under the mistaken impulses of a false 
philanthropy. It has a lofty sound, to be sure, to talk about American 
citizens being too good to be brought under the lash, upon the high seas; 
but he must have a very mistaken notion who does not see that tens of 
thousands of these pretending persons on shore, even, would be greatly 
benefited by a little judicious flogging. It is the judgment in 
administering, and not the mode of punishment, that requires to be 
looked into; and, in this respect, there has certainly been a great 
improvement of late years. It is seldom, indeed, that any institution, 
practice, or system, is improved by the blind interference of    
    
		
	
	
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