L'Aquilone du Estrellas (The Kite of Stars) 
By Dean Francis Alfar 
6 January 2003 
 
The night when she thought she would finally be a star, Maria Isabella 
du'l Cielo struggled to calm the trembling of her hands, reached over to 
cut the tether that tied her to the ground, and thought of that morning 
many years before when she'd first caught a glimpse of Lorenzo du 
Vicenzio ei Salvadore: tall, thick-browed and handsome, his eyes 
closed, oblivious to the cacophony of the accident waiting to occur 
around him. 
Maria Isabella had just turned sixteen then, and each set of her padrinos 
had given her (along with the sequined brida du caballo, the dresses of 
rare tulle, organza, and seda, and the diadema floral du'l dama -- the 
requisite floral circlet of young womanhood) a purse filled with coins 
to spend on anything she wanted. And so she'd gone past the Calle du 
Leones (where sleek cats of various pedigrees sometimes allowed 
themselves to be purchased, though if so, only until they tired of their 
new owners), walked through the Avenida du'l Conquistadores (where 
the statues of the conquerors of Ciudad Meiora lined the entirety of the 
broad promenade) and made her way to the Encantu lu Caminata (that 
maze-like series of interconnected streets, each leading to some wonder 
or marvel for sale), where little musical conch shells from the islets 
near Palao'an could be found. Those she liked very much. 
In the vicinity of the Plaza Emperyal, she saw a young man dressed in a 
coat embroidered with stars walk almost surely to his death. In that 
instant, Maria Isabella knew two things with the conviction reserved 
only for the very young: first, that she almost certainly loved this 
reckless man; and second, that if she simply stepped on a dog's tail --
the very dog watching the same scene unfold right next to her -- she 
could avert the man's seemingly senseless death. 
These were the elements of the accident-waiting-to-happen: an 
ill-tempered horse hitched to some noble's qalesa; an equally 
ill-tempered qalesa driver with a whip; a whistling panadero with a tray 
of plump pan du sal perched on his head; two puddles of fresh 
rainwater brought about by a brief downpour earlier that day; a sheet of 
stained glass en route to its final delivery destination at the house of the 
Most Excellent Primo Orador; a broken bottle of wine; and, of course, 
the young man who walked with his eyes closed. 
Without a moment's further thought, Maria Isabella stepped on the tail 
of the dog that was resting near her. The poor animal yelped in pain; 
which in turn startled the horse, making it stop temporarily; which in 
turn angered the qalesa driver even more, making him curse the horse; 
which in turn upset the delicate melody that the panadero was whistling; 
which in turn made the panadero miss stepping into the two puddles of 
rainwater; which in turn gave the men delivering the sheet of stained 
glass belonging to the Most Excellent Primo Orador an uninterrupted 
path; which in turn gave the young man enough room to cross the street 
without so much as missing a beat or stepping onto the broken wine 
bottle; which in turn would never give him the infection that had been 
destined to result in the loss of his right leg and, ultimately, his life. 
Everyone and everything continued to move on their own inexorable 
paths, and the dog she had stepped on growled once at her and then 
twisted around to nurse its sore tail. But Maria Isabella's eyes were on 
the young man in the star-embroidered coat, whose life she had just 
saved. She decided she would find out who he was. 
The first twenty people she asked did not know him. It was a butcher's 
boy who told her who he was, as she rested near the butcher's shop 
along the Rotonda du'l Vendedores. 
"His name is Lorenzo du Vicenzio," the butcher's boy said. "I know 
him because he shops here with his father once every sen-night. My 
master saves some of the choicest cuts for their family. They're rather
famous, you know. Maestro Vicenzio, the father, names stars." 
"Stars?" Maria Isabella asked. "And would you know why he walks 
with his eyes closed? The son, I mean." 
"Well, Lorenzo certainly isn't blind," the butcher's boy replied. "I think 
he keeps his eyes closed to preserve his vision for his stargazing at 
night. He mentioned he had some sort of telescope he uses at night." 
"How can I meet him?" she asked, all thoughts of musical conch shells 
gone from her mind. 
"You? What makes you think he will even see you? Listen," the 
butcher's boy whispered to her, "he only has eyes for the stars." 
"Then I'll make    
    
		
	
	
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